- Quick flashes of Jo’s face work well, but different angles of her face would look better
- Make sure cutsare in time with the music.
- At times, shots are too long, cut them down and add more variety.
- Use more variety of shots to make sure it doesn’t look like the same shots are being used over.
- Make it clearer what’s happening during the story line.
- At the end intersperse more footage of the band within the storyline, it’s too long a block of footage of just the storyline.
- During some parts shot at night it’s too dark to see what’s going on, cut these parts out.
- Make sure lip synching is lined up properly.
- Show more of Jo’s dancing than just the small part in the middle to intersperse it better within the rest of the performance.
- Have Jo playing around with the location and props more [e.g. playing with the rope etc.]
- Get a better variety of angles.
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